tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post4046830583375999572..comments2023-07-04T07:02:37.567-04:00Comments on David Brydon - Poetry Blog: Some Luster LostAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05791591892742270029noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-75593752873054051882011-06-12T15:18:21.934-04:002011-06-12T15:18:21.934-04:00I likes how this flowed and how you made it a poem...I likes how this flowed and how you made it a poem in a fifty five, very clever endingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-18375341798164041222011-06-12T13:06:26.973-04:002011-06-12T13:06:26.973-04:00great write ...we all want to know why and what we...great write ...we all want to know why and what we're here for, alas that is fates mystery thanks for the great wordsAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-21905226705820503052011-06-12T11:57:58.241-04:002011-06-12T11:57:58.241-04:00Great metaphors for wanting more from life through...Great metaphors for wanting more from life through the cradle of the telephone.. Short, sweet, leaves me wanting more to read. well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-1091498894677729982011-06-12T11:46:25.976-04:002011-06-12T11:46:25.976-04:00if i could find the secret to dusty thoughts that ...if i could find the secret to dusty thoughts that held my future,i'd certainly trade a few things in!to be cradled again...nice piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08660545422931632039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-64025802650168634582011-06-12T09:56:16.278-04:002011-06-12T09:56:16.278-04:00Your title ends the poem with great emphasis. Ah, ...Your title ends the poem with great emphasis. Ah, if we could all look up to discover the schematic of our existence. Excellent opening. Second stanza sounds soothing and maintains hope. Great write, David.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com