tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post4058584019641319895..comments2023-07-04T07:02:37.567-04:00Comments on David Brydon - Poetry Blog: Freedom of the SandsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05791591892742270029noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-88579728628840347962011-01-31T23:19:53.895-05:002011-01-31T23:19:53.895-05:00Love this! Nice job.Love this! Nice job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-1930225035467313122011-01-30T21:08:48.600-05:002011-01-30T21:08:48.600-05:00Humbling words, fantastic take on this prompt... t...Humbling words, fantastic take on this prompt... together you shall walk.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-1120639554210002542011-01-30T18:07:34.483-05:002011-01-30T18:07:34.483-05:00magnificent! truly magnificent!magnificent! truly magnificent!GYPSYWOMANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03042621041213415958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-60896301163818680592011-01-30T13:52:38.616-05:002011-01-30T13:52:38.616-05:00Simple, touching and memorable. Lovely take on the...Simple, touching and memorable. Lovely take on the photograph xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-63852387152650851162011-01-30T10:52:45.772-05:002011-01-30T10:52:45.772-05:00great humble invitations. the sands definately ar...great humble invitations. the sands definately are as free as the wind. some people dig their souls into us univited....actually I have done that way too many times without being invited. This made me pause for self reflection. Hmmmm. Godd response to the prompt.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-5298404480196159592011-01-30T10:16:48.116-05:002011-01-30T10:16:48.116-05:00If you allow me the
freedom of the sands
these t...If you allow me the<br /><br />freedom of the sands<br /><br />these two lines and the movement into the close of this poem...wonderful...the journey of two coming together...<br /><br />This is a fantastic response..I dig it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-11837888609246887192011-01-30T09:34:30.106-05:002011-01-30T09:34:30.106-05:00If you allow me the
freedom of the sands
then I sh...If you allow me the<br />freedom of the sands<br />then I shall rise to you...this really spoke to me..beautiful words davidClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-65477970683951074152011-01-30T09:22:33.937-05:002011-01-30T09:22:33.937-05:00nice...the freedom of the sand giving me room to r...nice...the freedom of the sand giving me room to respond to you...tight write.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-8476568689128575612011-01-30T09:08:13.512-05:002011-01-30T09:08:13.512-05:00Great wordplay in the beginning, and the lines lea...Great wordplay in the beginning, and the lines lead to a great resolution emphasizing the moving aspect of the walk—yet more so a journey of two people. Excellent challenge response, David.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-33996052861978730852011-01-30T08:24:40.389-05:002011-01-30T08:24:40.389-05:00A light and beautiful image of the love of a lifet...A light and beautiful image of the love of a lifetime. =)<br /><br />Cheers.Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.com