tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post7498611806478206888..comments2023-07-04T07:02:37.567-04:00Comments on David Brydon - Poetry Blog: Riding RailsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05791591892742270029noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-34826227324130794802011-01-03T17:22:15.289-05:002011-01-03T17:22:15.289-05:00Solid "gentlemen of the road" work. :)Solid "gentlemen of the road" work. :)Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-56214560169094768322010-12-31T10:04:41.494-05:002010-12-31T10:04:41.494-05:00heartfelt words...
enjoyed the imagery.heartfelt words...<br /><br />enjoyed the imagery.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-23653880492679046562010-12-29T15:29:41.520-05:002010-12-29T15:29:41.520-05:00Retired military yearning for the freedom of the r...Retired military yearning for the freedom of the road. I can understand this. A fine One Shot.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-91719242569232277042010-12-29T13:08:58.233-05:002010-12-29T13:08:58.233-05:00Love the feeling that you have taken us back in ti...Love the feeling that you have taken us back in time. A simpler time still wrought with seeking for the answers but they were within reach by riding the rails.<br /><br />Always a joy to read your work<br />Also always grateful for your sharing with others at One Shot<br /><br />Moonie smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-40888084572838125462010-12-29T12:04:05.046-05:002010-12-29T12:04:05.046-05:00At first I had rough visions of the movie "Em...At first I had rough visions of the movie "Emperor of The North" (a.k.a. "The Emperor of The North Pole" - Lee Marvin, Ernest Borgnine - great movie!)<br /><br />But in later lines it mellowed into a soothing ride.<br /><br />Nice One Shot, David!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-65621922056642683712010-12-29T06:23:22.523-05:002010-12-29T06:23:22.523-05:00Again David, you just capture my heart here. i lov...Again David, you just capture my heart here. i love how your lines make me feel, almost in the place of the happening. so powerful and poignant!<br />great write :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-81345696420874333832010-12-28T22:46:03.028-05:002010-12-28T22:46:03.028-05:00ah you capture my own heart well with your words.....ah you capture my own heart well with your words...nice one shotBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-92175346965130020582010-12-28T20:37:23.730-05:002010-12-28T20:37:23.730-05:00I love the rhythm and internal rhymes - this is a ...I love the rhythm and internal rhymes - this is a very well crafted piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-30632455776979771682010-12-28T20:15:09.174-05:002010-12-28T20:15:09.174-05:00how similar our poetic philosophies. and how much...how similar our poetic philosophies. and how much I enjoyed the read, a vision only age and experience can bringMontyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17446385166445251013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-55626904907982215102010-12-28T19:58:24.545-05:002010-12-28T19:58:24.545-05:00The balance of tension, between seeking adventure ...The balance of tension, between seeking adventure and feeling homesick, colors the images with emotion. Excellent poem!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-29209957987171228302010-12-28T10:32:02.536-05:002010-12-28T10:32:02.536-05:00Wow! You transport the reader to this place.........Wow! You transport the reader to this place.......excellent!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4410792092278580766.post-79672210270264901532010-12-28T08:55:57.057-05:002010-12-28T08:55:57.057-05:00Your words paint a portrait that is even more vivi...Your words paint a portrait that is even more vivid than one a camera could produce. Wonderful piece. Thank you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com