The hardest thing to do
is to simplify what’s true
with all these dots, which
connect me to you.
An outline of a vision
on the eve, of this division
ink spots - galaxies,
a space away, and
a picture looms.
I turned a leaf,
a side unseen
then began to draw
these lines between.
All these dots,
with curves…
a puzzle in the end.
This sketch of what
could have been,
yet never seen
a cluster
of the stars between.
The hardest thing to do
is to simplify what’s true.
Regardless,
each dot connects me
to you.
"I turned a leaf,
ReplyDeletea side unseen
then began to draw
these lines between."
Melodic. Your poem made me think of many things, especially pixels, art, stars, and whether there is a definitive notion of truth or not.
a vision of images forming...
ReplyDelete...rob kistner
Image & Verse
if only it were as simple as connecting the dots...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, significant dots connecting a wondrous world. Well done in the simplicity it refers to.
ReplyDeleteOh, this is beautiful - so simple. *bows to greatness*
ReplyDeleteI like the way dots connect. Math way of being that.
ReplyDeletethe beast demands
I love the musicality of the piece:
ReplyDeleteThis sketch of what
could have been,
yet never seen
a cluster
of the stars between...
Great rhythm and a vista for the imagination.
A cool piece. The ending was strong! Nice one...
ReplyDeletebeautiful rhythm in your verse.. and nice thought too...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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