My Book "A Splash of Ink" is now available on Amazon in Kindle and Paperback formats (personally, I like the paperback version as eBooks don't format poetry very well - just being honest :-)
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Great wordplay in the beginning, and the lines lead to a great resolution emphasizing the moving aspect of the walk—yet more so a journey of two people. Excellent challenge response, David.
great humble invitations. the sands definately are as free as the wind. some people dig their souls into us univited....actually I have done that way too many times without being invited. This made me pause for self reflection. Hmmmm. Godd response to the prompt.
A light and beautiful image of the love of a lifetime. =)
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Great wordplay in the beginning, and the lines lead to a great resolution emphasizing the moving aspect of the walk—yet more so a journey of two people. Excellent challenge response, David.
ReplyDeletenice...the freedom of the sand giving me room to respond to you...tight write.
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then I shall rise to you...this really spoke to me..beautiful words david
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these two lines and the movement into the close of this poem...wonderful...the journey of two coming together...
This is a fantastic response..I dig it!
great humble invitations. the sands definately are as free as the wind. some people dig their souls into us univited....actually I have done that way too many times without being invited. This made me pause for self reflection. Hmmmm. Godd response to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteSimple, touching and memorable. Lovely take on the photograph x
ReplyDeletemagnificent! truly magnificent!
ReplyDeleteHumbling words, fantastic take on this prompt... together you shall walk.
ReplyDeleteLove this! Nice job.
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