My Book "A Splash of Ink" is now available on Amazon in Kindle and Paperback formats (personally, I like the paperback version as eBooks don't format poetry very well - just being honest :-)
I wish to thank everyone for their continued support. Thank you!
your poem is so simply stated and beautiful...i envisioned a tree, its branches reaching out into empty space...rain falling upon it and drops lingering just long enough upon a leaf until dripping down to melt away and moisten the earth...i enjoyed reading your poem over again and again because each time it gave me another way to grasp loneliness...beautifully written...thank you for this one...
tight poem.. felt a quiet sadness as I read it.. nice work
ReplyDeleteWow that really is Loneliness - like a stop frame film of your life through blurred eyes. Wonderful.
ReplyDeletedang that second stanza is intense...rich with emotion...
ReplyDeletePowerful. The second stanza packs a real punch.
ReplyDeleteLoneliness can be all-consuming. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteNice play on words...
ReplyDeleteyour poem is so simply stated and beautiful...i envisioned a tree, its branches reaching out into empty space...rain falling upon it and drops lingering just long enough upon a leaf until dripping down to melt away and moisten the earth...i enjoyed reading your poem over again and again because each time it gave me another way to grasp loneliness...beautifully written...thank you for this one...
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