A portrait of life you see
turmoil ridden, lost at sea
German wine and French Béarnaise
Jumping Frogs and twisted days
I tumbled down a stair or two
while looking back at you
Intoxicated and besot
I wobbled round and drunk allot
those twisted tortured days of haze
A portrait of a life you see
not always what you want it to be
German wine and French Béarnaise
Jumping Frogs and twisted days
Many days ago.
Wonderful and reflective piece ....that we can be blessed to have and blessed to have now in the past....all is lesson even our tortured days...bkm
ReplyDeleteGreat wordplay and twists of language, David. Smooth lines of recollection. A nice poetic portrait of "Days Ago" cheers
ReplyDeletenice. i did get a chuckle as i slipped down some stairs once looking at a girl...but besides that...love the pairing there in the last verse...nice play...great one shot!
ReplyDeleteAh, good times. Besotted and in love. If any reader hasn't been there, he/she has missed some of the best times in life. You capture it vividly. Thanks, Gay @beachanny
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully said... I liked it... A portrait of life...
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